In my Research Proposal paper I realized that I did an okay job at introducing my topic, but not so good at explaining what I was going to thouroughly going to be talking about. A lot of my feedback was that I did not explain myself too well, which I have always struggle with when writing papers. If I had the chance to revisit this paper, I would definitely explain my points more. In my Toulmin paper, I explained what I wanted to in my Research Paper a bit more, but there is always more work to be done. Overall, I think I did an average job, but it definitely could and should have been better.