I got a lot of positive feedback on my research paper. They enjoyed my paper as a whole, especially my hook of “our planet is dying faster than ever before,” and I am happy that they found it to be a pleasant read. The biggest piece of feedback that I received was to expand on my paper and add more details. It was recommended to me by my peers that I go back to my sources to find more quotes to add to my paper in order to increase the word count. I intend to find more statistics and scientific evidence to add to my paper to bulk it up. Other than that, there were only a few minor grammar mistakes, which I appreciate my peers for catching, and I intend to fix. Once I reach the minimum word count and fix my mistakes, my paper will finally be complete.