I did very well on my mid term and proved I can pass the final exam. My skills as a writer has improved since the beginning and it is starting to pay off. My grade on the mid term was a 88 and that is an improvement of the first essay in the class. I still need to work on some issues though. The biggest issue I need to work on is my use of punctuation. The main punctuation is my use of commas.

I did a great job in fixing my issues involving the use of plural nouns. The way I fixed that is I made sure every time I used noun I looked to see if it is plural or singular. Before this class I never said, he or she, I would say them. Now I know it depends on what noun I use.

One of the biggest issues I still have is i rush through the essay. It is not because I want to get it over with, rather I just have so much ideals in my mind and I want to make sure that I don’t lose them. This has been a issue I have had all throughout my life.

The main issue I had again was my use of commas. This is a product of me going way to fast. It wasn’t as bad as my first essay, but it was definitely still an issue. The key to fixing this issue for me is making sure I practice and make it become natural instinct. Then that way me going to fast shouldn’t be an issue.

I was very happy with my mid term grade. Hopefully I will fix the couple of issues I have and do very well on the final. I just need to make sure I slow down and don’t make little mistakes.