The corrections I received on my draft were about word choice, sentence structure, and making sure my citations were in mla format. One peer found that the content of my draft is good so I think they found it effective even though I did not have much to say on my draft.They didn’t ask me something I hadn’t considered, and they didn’t mention what they felt I needed to explain better or expand upon. For me, I know I need to work on getting the required word count for the final draft. I only had 440 words out of 1900 words. And to get to 1900 words I obviously need to add more sources and add more paragraphs to reach the required word count. My draft did not even reach the required content for the rough draft so it’s really important that I add more words to reach that amount.