My Reflection

If I were to write this essay again, I would focus less on the history of Detroit and more on the actual connection. When I wrote this, I was rushing and did not take the proper time to ensure that the point I was trying to make came across effectively. I also feel like in my writing, I rambled on around the topic and needed to get my point across more clearly. Finally, I could have written more about my personal connection and what my personal opinion is on the city. If I were more personable in my Essay, it would have been better and my point would have made more sense.