My Reflection

Looking back on my personal reflection essay, I see a consistent problem of generalization and repetitiveness. Throughout my writing, I restate the same point of being a structured thinker without really going into detail on how personal experiences in my life shaped the way I think. I used generalities a lot in this essay and in most of my writing. More vivid examples would have made this essay more personable for readers. My conclusion could have been stronger as well and tied in my personal growth with lessons on education and self-expression.