My Reflection

Looking back at my Rhetorical Analysis essay, I struggled with similar problems to my OpEd essay. I repeated myself a lot and brought up the same points multiple times throughout the essay. I could have been clearer and concise about my analysis points to make the essay flow better. My thesis was also weak, and I could have expanded on overlooked ecologies. If I had made my points more concise and not been as repetitive in my writing, my essay would have been better as a whole.