If I were to write this essay again, I would focus less on the history of Detroit and more on the actual connection. When I wrote this, I was rushing and did not take the proper time to ensure that the point I was trying to make came across effectively. I also feel like in my writing, I rambled on around the topic and needed to get my point across more clearly. Finally, I could have written more about my personal connection and what my personal opinion is on the city. If I were more personable in my Essay, it would have been better and my point would have made more sense.<\/p>\n\n\nenglish-110-oped-1-2 My Reflection If I were to write this essay again, I would focus less on the history of Detroit and more on the actual connection. When I wrote this, I was rushing and did not take the proper time to… Continue Reading →<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":31406,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/191"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/31406"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=191"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/191\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":198,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/191\/revisions\/198"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110ceportfolio\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=191"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}