First Draft:

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The topic at hand was “What I learned through my experiences as a lifelong learner”. The first draft consisted of getting my ideas on paper. I wanted to focus on rewriting my ideas from English and turning them into Japanese. After writing my first draft, I was able to get some helpful feedback from my peers. 

Second Draft:

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For the second draft, I needed to write a second paragraph using semi-formal/stiff formatting. I also brushed up a little of the vocabulary and introduced specific kanji to better supplement the draft. Afterwards, I was able to get feedback from Marken Sensei to better prepare me for the final draft.