UNIV150
Since week six through now, I have experienced some growth in my writing. This growth took many hours of dedication and hard work on my writing to make it the best I can possibly do. I have been minimizing the number of mistakes in writing. For example, I have been able to catch when my verbs are not in tense agreement. Another thing I have been able to catch more easily is when having comma splices in my sentences. I believe this growth in my writing from me getting my papers revised multiple times. The people who revise my papers are able to catch mistakes that I miss. This allows me to be aware of these mistakes, and look for them in future essays. Even though I have experienced some growth in my writing I notice some common mistakes that I make that I need to work on. One of those mistakes is not applying enough examples in my essays, these examples allow the reader to comprehend my main point and relate to it. Another thing I have been struggling with is providing enough details in my essays. when I have a lack of detail in my papers sometimes it does not make points clear and leave the reader possibly confused. These small and esay mistakes cna ruin my papers and I need to improve on it, and the way I can improve on it is by making a good outline, An outline will allow me to make sure I have examples for each point, and make sure I have good details for each topic in clear and oragnized way. In conclusion, I have experience growth in my writing these past few weeks, by finding when my verbs are in the same tense and finding comma splices. It also taught that I need to provided more details, and better examples in my essays.