Reflecting on my literacy sponsor essay, I see some room for improvement and it’s the same mistakes as the others. Structure, the way that I placed my ideals were messy and my transitions were poorly placed making my essay hard to reading and lacked clarity. The flow of a text is the most compelling point, if you don’t have a proper flow points are lost, it becomes boring and it loses its purpose. Some topics shifty faster than others, not giving the reader a chance to incorporate other points made previously. I could have made better examples, or worded them in way that can be visualized. Something the reader can compare their own experiences with. Once again proofreading, if I had proofread I would notice how run on and unorganized my structure and flow were.