{"id":9,"date":"2025-05-04T04:02:59","date_gmt":"2025-05-04T04:02:59","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/engl110-template\/?page_id=8"},"modified":"2025-05-04T19:35:17","modified_gmt":"2025-05-04T19:35:17","slug":"writing-sample-1","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/formal-writing\/writing-sample-1\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Sample #1: Literacy Sponsors\/ Reflection"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div class=\"wp-block-columns is-layout-flex wp-container-core-columns-layout-1 wp-block-columns-is-layout-flex\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-column is-layout-flow wp-block-column-is-layout-flow\" style=\"flex-basis:100%\">\n<div class=\"wp-block-group is-layout-constrained wp-block-group-is-layout-constrained\"><div class=\"wp-block-group__inner-container\"><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/39075\/2025\/05\/My-Literacy-Ecologies.docx.pdf\" class=\"pdfemb-viewer\" style=\"\" data-width=\"max\" data-height=\"max\"  data-toolbar=\"bottom\" data-toolbar-fixed=\"off\">My-Literacy-Ecologies.docx<br\/><\/a>\n<p class=\"wp-block-pdfemb-pdf-embedder-viewer\"><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Reflecting on my literacy sponsor essay, I see some room for improvement and it\u2019s the same mistakes as the others. Structure, the way that I placed my ideals were messy and my transitions were poorly placed making my essay hard to reading and lacked clarity. The flow of a text is the most compelling point, if you don\u2019t have a proper flow points are lost, it becomes boring and it loses its purpose. Some topics shifty faster than others, not giving the reader a chance to incorporate other points made previously. I could have made better examples, or worded them in way that can be visualized. Something the reader can compare their own experiences with. Once again proofreading, if I had proofread I would notice how run on and unorganized my structure and flow were.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Reflecting on my literacy sponsor essay, I see some room for improvement and it\u2019s the same mistakes as the others. Structure, the way that I placed my ideals were messy and my transitions were poorly placed making my essay hard to reading and lacked clarity. The flow of a text is the most compelling point,&#8230; <\/p>\n<div class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/formal-writing\/writing-sample-1\/\">Read More<\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":29571,"featured_media":0,"parent":8,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/9"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/29571"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=9"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/9\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":57,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/9\/revisions\/57"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/8"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.wp.odu.edu\/jasmine-eng-110c-eportfolio-\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=9"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}