As no paper is perfect, there are somethings I can improve in my rhetorical analysis. For one, I should clarify whenever I can as readers will have varying levels of knowledge regarding the topic I wrote about, which was price gouging. The only way to fix this would be multiple rereads. My thesis statement also needed work as it did not clearly state the intent of my paper. I also used a quote within a topic sentence which, by allowing another writer to have the first word, prevents me from relating a paragraph to my thesis statement. Something else I need to work on in my word choice. More specifically, my use of filler words such as ‘very’ and ‘really’ as such words add no meaning to a sentence. I would also like to work on grammar and usage as this has always been one of my weakest areas when writing. One way to do this would be to read each sentence of a paragraph in reverse so as to isolate and check each sentence. There were also other easily avoided mistakes that I made such as the use of incorrect page number color and font as well as the mislabeling of the works cited page as ‘bibliography’.