After reviewing my Rogerian argument, I have learned that I need to improve on.
The things I need to work on is to spell out contractions, avoid using the same word constantly, use quotations for article titles, and need to fix my MLA quotations. I could probably see the writing center if I had to write my rogerian over again. But also, I should ask a plenty of questions while I’m working on my rogerian rewrite. The issues from my previous papers are mostly the same but with more added to it. When it comes to using the same word over and over, I could look up synonyms for some words. I should probably look up a thesaurus or some other synonym website to think of different words. Besides constant use of words, I also need to review how to MLA a scholarly article. I also need to add quotations to my article title so I can actually get the citations right. Also, I need to make an appointment for the writing center and go see if I can get it right this time around. Also,when I have my rogerian rewrite, I should also ask questions about things I need to add to my paper.
The other comments that were placed on my Rogerian Argument was to write it in present tense. This problem is able to be addressed with just looking up some of the things to fix this. Throughout the next few weeks, I will try to correct my mistakes from the other papers to boost my writing skill. The various problems will be addressed in the next paper I write. Another problem that I had, I also need to improve my word choice by looking up different words. I think that my rogerian had made me think about my position on my topic while working.