I really enjoyed writing essay four because, I could choose to write about anything I wanted to. Even though I enjoyed it, it did give me some challenges. It was difficult trying to find an interesting topic because I didn’t want it to be interesting to me and not the reader. I picked something that can have many opinions on it, and it also could answer questions some people may have. When writing I tend to not have a specific area where I need to stop, so my paragraphs seem to get bigger and bigger when I’m in charge of my own paper. I also tend to feel that I am off track while writing but it always seems to make sense in the end, which is kind of confusing to me. I feel as if I did better with placing my commas and making sure I had my periods placed in the right spots. I usually fail with those two things, especially when using commas I can go overboard and use them when its not needed. I learned over the year to place them in the correct areas and even if I just want to place one to make the sentence ‘look better’ I don’t always need it. I also enjoyed being able to look back at the article and taking points from them to elaborate on, instead of me trying to elaborate on myself with the other papers. I felt more comfortable going off of what the article was saying rather than getting mixed up with my own words. While writing this essay I also took a step back and looked at each paragraph after I finished writing it, because iv’e heard that helps you stay organized while writing the paper. It actually helped a lot because when I finished writing one paragraph I was sure not to bring up anything that has already been said. I also had a problem with that with my second essay I was going back and referring to things that I had already said and you are not supposed to get in the habit of doing that. Overall, I think I did very well on this paper.