For my dining establishment review, one of my main issues was my introduction. I usually am not the best when it comes to writing introductions or conclusions, and this was no exception. While I did have most of the necessary components in my introduction, it was not as descriptive as I would have liked it to be. However, as I have made my way through the course, I have developed more as a writer and could now  improve upon my introduction if I had the chance to rewrite it. Another thing that I struggled with and have all throughout my English courses was the development of my paper. I tend to write how I would speak, and so sometimes I accidentally  go off on a tangent and write ideas that are unnecessary or not central to the main focus of the paper. Many times, I will also do this to increase my word count. However, I have learned that usually, quality matters more than quantity, and that adding fluff to a paper can actually make it worse despite having the minimum word count required. Other than grammar mistakes, those are the main things I would change and improve upon in my paper given the chance.