Assignment reflection

After reviewing my Research Proposal and Annotated Bibliography, there are several areas of improvement I would focus on if I had the chance to revisit the assignment. The main reoccurring problem throughout the feedback I received was that my citations had multiple errors in almost every citation. Correcting my citations following the proper MLA format would be the first thing to revise. The next problem was the research proposal at the beginning of the assignment. I would change the title to the title of my Toulmin essay and explain what my topic is about more thoroughly. The proposal is giving more of a history lesson than a review of my topic. The third thing on my list of improvement is creating my work in the present tense. I switch between present and past tense when it needs to be present tense because the debate is occurring now. Another area of improvement would maintain my writing in the third person because I occasionally switch to the first person. Finally, the assignment needs to follow proper MLA formatting. I would enter the missing right header and remove extra space between paragraphs so I can get points back.