Presentational Writing


For Project 3 I had to write a paragraph describing my daily schedule and what I do and at what time. The first picture is of my first attempt at completing this assignment, and as so you can see, there were a lot of mistakes mad. Most of these mistakes were verbs that were not correctly conjugated, which is something that I previously said I needed to work on already. The second picture is the revised version of my schedule description. This is were I took the comments that were made on my first attempt and integrated them into this one. Overall I learned that it is crucial to makes sure the verb aligns with the subject or else it won’t make sense when reading it.