In the mechanics exercises, I would revise the way they are presented. I would bold the directions to make them stand out more, underline mistakes and corrections in sample sentences, and overall, I would include more varying examples. I lost my place during the activities because all the texts looked similar. I second-guessed my answers because no example reflected it, even though I think my answers work. These are problems that inhibit efficiency and may cause confusion for the reader.

Referring to the pronoun activity specifically, “their” and “they” can now be used as singular pronoun because it is inclusive of all people and helps writers avoid making assumptions about gender. The exercises should be reflected to avoid confusion and discourage writers from using the pronouns “they” and “their.”

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