Everyone makes mistakes in their essays.  Even I had errors in my essay. This can be started when I had written my rough draft and got it reviewed at a writing session. There I got to know about a lot of stuff that I had been missing from an essay. The main thing being all the arguments being broken down into three different arguments. The reviewer told me all my arguments can make one argument and I had just split them up into three. That’s when my reviewer gave me some suggestions about some other points that I could use as my main argument. That’s when I changed my essay and added new arguments to my essay, and edited it based on the other requirements and submitted it. The thing that I learned from my essay when I got my final essay back was not to use the word ‘you’ in the essay, but it can be used in a quote. After this, my next major mistake in the essay was the sentence structure and punctuation errors. I had realized that I had made a lot of errors and could have improved it if I would have read my essay before turning it in for a reviewing session. The final mistake in my essay was the fragment mistake. This means either my sentence was incomplete, or it didn’t make sense at times. Basically, I would run over a sentence with a new topic. This would confuse the person in what I’m trying to explain in a sentence. Thus, these were my major mistakes and I hope not to repeat them again in the future. For this not to happen in future I would recheck my essay and would always recheck my essay with the rubric before submitting it.