This was the best essay I had done so far.  Though I had errors in my essay. This can be started when I had my rough draft and got it reviewed at a writing session. There I got to know about a lot of stuff that I had been missing from an essay. The main thing being all the arguments can be formed even better. The reviewer told me all my arguments need to have intext citation in them. That’s when my reviewer gave me some suggestions about some other points that I could have in my main argument. That’s when I changed my essay and added new arguments to my essay, and edited it based on the other requirements and submitted it. The thing that I learned from my essay when I got my final essay back was, I can still write better and was close to good writing. After this, my next minor mistake in the essay was the sentence structure and punctuation errors. I had realized that I had made some errors and could have improved it if I would have read my essay before turning it in for final submission. The final mistake in my essay was the fragment mistake. This means either my sentence was incomplete, or it didn’t make sense at times. Basically, I would run over a sentence with a new topic. This would confuse the person in what I’m trying to explain in a sentence. Thus, these were my major mistakes and I hope not to repeat them again in the future. For this not to happen in the future I would recheck my essay and would always recheck my essay with the rubric before submitting it. Overall, in the end, I felt doing this essay and hope to do well in my upcoming essays as well.