This essay was different from the other essays as this essay was about taking one side. In this essay, I made some mistakes. Some of these were the shift of person not being clear. The next was a lack of support of details in the essay as well as some fragment mistakes. The main thing I have seen in this essay was that in-text citation is the key when taking supporting details from an article. The next thing lagging in my essay was the subject-verb agreement as well as the punctuation. My words were clear in some of the lines as well as the tense wasn’t right. My next error was the circular reasoning in the essay as I related every reason with the previous reasons. This led to a lack of enough development in the essay as well as the easy got out of the main topic. And then lack of sufficiency led to unity not being proper as the words as well as the statements being repeated, and the focus of the essay got shifted each time a new paragraph was being discussed. The next major mistake in my essay was missing words. I had been missing words that didn’t make the paragraph make sense and while reading the essay would sound incomplete at certain points. The last error in my essay was the modifier placement which wouldn’t make the essay change points at every other sentence.